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metrocitymod (metrocitymod) wrote,
@ 2011-10-10 23:02:00

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	brittany_m 2012-01-23 01:32 pm UTC (link)
	How come you can not accept my application at this time? (Reply to this) (Thread)

metrocitymod
2012-01-23 02:08 pm UTC (link)

As our first point in the rules states:

While it is important that you are a decent writer, we are more concerned with the quality and complexity of your characters. We want to see a broad selection of ages, cultures, and races. Does this mean all generally popular PBs will be turned away? Not necessarily. If you really want to use Scarlett Johansson as a face, just make certain that she is supported with a unique, compelling background and personality. Storylines of the same nature are encouraged. We'd like you to use this as an opportunity to stretch your imagination and create intriguing collaborations with other writers. We will be offering optional writing prompts, projects and other opportunities to keep things moving. Ideally, this will be an active, fun, and inspiring community where writers can freely exercise their craft.

Brittany's background, while slightly different from any other character in the community, is too commonly general and not solid of a storyline enough. Her parents occupation has also, by now, been over mentioned especially with some characters in the game already having the same professions. We need to know Brittany has more goals other than finding a baby daddy or reuniting with her baby daddy because that would be too obvious and over played.

Your application was also incomplete with no examples provided.

You are more than welcome to reapply this character again once you have reworked her with more distinguished and unique details.

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